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by O-Frosty
Thu Feb 18, 2016 12:54 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: What if? (TW)
Replies: 0
Views: 1202

What if? (TW)

Advisory/Warning- This story contains gore, mature matters, and not suitable for the faint-hearted. You have been warned, continue at your own risk. Does anyone here live in a high-rise apartment that includes a garbage chute? Ever took a deep breath and thought how much the place stank? If so have...
by O-Frosty
Tue Feb 16, 2016 1:37 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)
Replies: 14
Views: 10500

Re: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)

Aw, I'm happy to hear. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. C:
by O-Frosty
Tue Feb 09, 2016 2:30 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: No Character Development
Replies: 4
Views: 2046

Re: Please Don't Read This

Creepy with an unexpected end... o.o...
by O-Frosty
Tue Feb 09, 2016 2:24 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)
Replies: 14
Views: 10500

Re: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)

Thank you all for your thoughtful feedback. I'm glad to hear that some readers enjoyed this story, even though there are grammar mistakes and spelling issues. As I just started story writing I will continue to improve my writing in my future stories, so please be patient with me. :)

~Thank you :D
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:05 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)
Replies: 14
Views: 10500

Re: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)

I'm back with a slightly more coherent explanation as to why I found such a problem with this story. 1. Honestly, it's lazy. The "crazy mentally ill person" trope has been played to death. 2. There are real life people (me being one of them) with this particular disorder, and are demonize...
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 30, 2016 3:58 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: My Best Friend is too Perfect
Replies: 6
Views: 4979

Re: My Best Friend is too Perfect

Alright, I'll take note, thanks again C:
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 8:10 pm
Forum: Story Contest: October (2015)
Topic: Don't Blink
Replies: 61
Views: 102062

Re: Don't Blink

I Loved this story, wish there was a sequel D:
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 8:03 pm
Forum: Creepy
Topic: Strange object
Replies: 5
Views: 3019

Re: Strange object

Second coin thingy looks like the horoscope signs.
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:59 pm
Forum: Story Contest: December (2015)
Topic: Under My Teeth (TW: Gore)
Replies: 54
Views: 32626

Re: Under My Teeth (TW: Gore)

Well, this just made me more anxious about whats under my teeeeeth, jk.
Beautiful, Creeeepy/gruesome story :) Goodjob.
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:53 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Dreamscaper
Replies: 1
Views: 2107

Re: Dreamscaper

Creepy, yet sad at the same time, amazing. :)
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:51 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Look What You've Made Me Do (tw gore)
Replies: 7
Views: 4428

Re: Look What You've Made Me Do (tw gore)

This story is astonishing, its like watching a movie. Every paragraph is so descriptive o.o
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:48 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: My Best Friend is too Perfect
Replies: 6
Views: 4979

Re: My Best Friend is too Perfect

Thaaaaank yooooou :D I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:43 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)
Replies: 14
Views: 10500

Mommy & Daddy love you. (TW- Violence/Abuse)

TW - Violence/Abuse Sweetie, we love you . We will love you until the very end. That's what my parents tell me, but I know a concealed lie when I see one. They never loved me, they were too selfish to know what loving someone felt like. They only cared about themselves and their own selfish goals. ...
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:57 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Bad Judgment
Replies: 23
Views: 32522

Re: Bad Judgement

That ending was so unexpected >.< Truly an amazing story.
by O-Frosty
Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:22 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: My Best Friend is too Perfect
Replies: 6
Views: 4979

Re: My Best Friend is too Perfect

Aw, Thank you :) It's my first time writing a creepy story with a twist, really appreciate the review. On the other hand, is there anything that was confusing or needed improvements on?

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