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by krabbypatting
Sat Feb 11, 2017 5:22 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: Retributive Punishment
Replies: 9
Views: 14117

Re: Retributive Punishment

adi wrote:im so confused. i hate to be that person but would you mind if i asked for an explanation. like, what did he do? im sorry


He had sexual Skype call with the girl's sister, who is a child
by krabbypatting
Fri Jan 13, 2017 4:13 am
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: Retributive Punishment
Replies: 9
Views: 14117

Re: Retributive Punishment

Jackulantern wrote:Only issue I have with the originality of this story is that it sounds eerily similar to an episode of black mirror.


Omg, I was worried about this. I loved that episode so much. A few people who have seen it said that it was similar, but not too much so.
by krabbypatting
Thu Jan 12, 2017 4:30 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: Retributive Punishment
Replies: 9
Views: 14117

Re: Retributive Punishment

Lunakinesis wrote:My stomach lurched at that ending, dude got off lightly indeed!

Spilllable wrote:Omg this is super good

astraldolly wrote:Oh shit, that was amazing


Thanks guys :D any points for improvement?
by krabbypatting
Mon Jan 09, 2017 4:53 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: Marriage Problems
Replies: 14
Views: 10469

Re: Marriage Problems

I really enjoyed this; it was short, creepy, and intriguing. Good work :D
by krabbypatting
Sun Jan 08, 2017 11:21 am
Forum: Entertainment
Topic: The Forest: Thoughts?
Replies: 5
Views: 1422

Re: The Forest: Thoughts?

I can't say i will. There exploiting a real problem that actual people are dying from right now, and they didn't even cast an Japanese people in the main roles. Looks like a boring, white washed cheap horror flick. It could've been something if they cared more. I thought this whilst watching it. If...
by krabbypatting
Tue Jan 03, 2017 3:20 am
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: The Winstons
Replies: 10
Views: 32040

Re: The Winstons

This is so sad, but also satisfying in a way. It's definitely refreshing. I have to admit that I looked at the spoilers and immediately felt grim about the idea of child death and miscarriage (obviously) as there are a lot of (good, but) super dark stories about that kind of thing here. I enjoyed th...
by krabbypatting
Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:42 am
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: From the Mouths of Babes
Replies: 17
Views: 42461

Re: From the Mouths of Babes

I love this, it's so unique. Unlike many short stories, the ending took me completely off guard
by krabbypatting
Mon Jan 02, 2017 7:38 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2017
Topic: Retributive Punishment
Replies: 9
Views: 14117

Retributive Punishment

Trigger warnings will spoil the plot, js Trigger warnings: paedophilia, child grooming, gore, self harm, and strong language. The word 'stupid' is also used, if anyone is offended by that. Retributive Punishment I couldn't let it get out. Well, obviously. Obviously I couldn't let that sort o...
by krabbypatting
Mon Jan 02, 2017 9:26 am
Forum: Technical Issues
Topic: Display Picture
Replies: 9
Views: 2279

Re: Display Picture

I used this to fix mine, was able to do it on my tablet and reckon it would work on a phone too

http://forum.shopheroes.com/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=5090
by krabbypatting
Mon Jan 02, 2017 8:50 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: A Love Letter
Replies: 14
Views: 28288

Re: A Love Letter

I honestly really like your writing style. I think it's refreshing, and simple. To me, it definitely seems like something a lonely, fucked up school janitor would write. My only criticism would be that you could maybe inject a little more character into him, sort of give him a little bit more depth....
by krabbypatting
Sun Jan 01, 2017 5:25 pm
Forum: Glitch In The Matrix
Topic: Missing 'Hunger Games' Chapter
Replies: 3
Views: 1992

Re: Missing 'Hunger Games' Chapter

I don't know if you've heard of the Mandela effect, but this reminds me of that
by krabbypatting
Sun Jan 01, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Short Scary Stories
Topic: Mommy Cuts My Hair
Replies: 3
Views: 4949

Re: Mommy Cuts My Hair

This made my skin crawl :?
by krabbypatting
Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:58 pm
Forum: Short Scary Stories
Topic: Enjoy the Ride
Replies: 1
Views: 2033

Re: Enjoy the Ride

That twisttttt :shock: this is so creative, do u ever read something and just wish u had written it
by krabbypatting
Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:54 pm
Forum: Short Scary Stories
Topic: Growth
Replies: 1
Views: 1837

Re: Growth

This is a really interesting perspective, a good read
by krabbypatting
Sat Dec 31, 2016 8:14 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: It's hard to clean blood out of the crotch of a fur suit.
Replies: 1
Views: 1618

Re: It's hard to clean blood out of the crotch of a fur suit.

Man, this is funny and gross and gripping, mostly gross tho, yuck

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