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by eksterteran
Thu Sep 01, 2016 10:57 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: The Fairdale Kids Stay Inside
Replies: 5
Views: 2410

Re: The Fairdale Kids Stay Inside

Honestly this reminds me of some of the scariest nightmares I have had. Yeah, I don't do well with "right outside the window" stories. (And I'm psychotic as well, so imagine how much fun it is when my brain decides to take a little flight of fancy.) So, of course, I'm reading this right b...
by eksterteran
Tue Aug 30, 2016 10:02 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Zombie Apocalypse
Replies: 2
Views: 1004

Re: Zombie Apocalypse

This is so good! I've seen the premise of body-dead, so to say, before, but never written this well.
by eksterteran
Tue Aug 30, 2016 8:52 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Error 87
Replies: 16
Views: 15432

Re: Error 87

Well, we've known for a long time that teleporters are just really advanced 3-D printers. And we all know how printers love their glitches...
by eksterteran
Tue Aug 30, 2016 8:32 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: The Last Five Pounds Are the Hardest
Replies: 17
Views: 41417

Re: The Last Five Pounds Are the Hardest

I won't lie; that's exactly what I was going for with the whole anorexia thing. To be honest I'm sick and tired of seeing those stories that read like 'wow I'm so fat everyone thinks I'm fat I can't run because I'm fat I'm in the hospital because I'm fat DUN DUN DUN I died I was actually starving',...
by eksterteran
Sun Apr 10, 2016 12:56 pm
Forum: Story Contest: December (2015)
Topic: First Date
Replies: 10
Views: 47547

Re: First Date

So she escaped from being killed and skinned to become a love seat? That she escaped becoming a loveseat is definite. But a few hints dropped in the story, as well as how abruptly it ends, leads me to believe she killed him . I finally caved in and created a profile, not expecting much. However, a ...
by eksterteran
Tue Apr 05, 2016 1:33 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: Carmen
Replies: 22
Views: 33934

Re: Carmen

Damn, very nice! It might be weird, but I'm not actually worried for the buyer. Either they know how to control what's going on, or Louis likes them. As long as Carmen doesn't get jealous (of either of them) it seems like the trio should be fine. Although I can imagine Carmen feeling like Louis is t...
by eksterteran
Mon Apr 04, 2016 10:14 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: Crawling
Replies: 5
Views: 2509

Re: Crawling

Ooo, this is REALLY GOOD!
by eksterteran
Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:42 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: Replaced
Replies: 22
Views: 10638

Re: Replaced

EXCELLENT
by eksterteran
Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:40 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: The One and the Lonely
Replies: 11
Views: 3078

Re: The One and the Lonely

Amyphere wrote:This is pretty good! You don't have to be hard on yourself. You have just the tone you need for this kind of story.

I agree, this one's really good! I love the stories where my mind grabs it and runs away trying to figure out the Before and After of what was written!
by eksterteran
Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:13 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: The Monster on Top of the Bed
Replies: 7
Views: 2616

Re: The Monster on Top of the Bed

I like this one a lot! There are little questions I have, but that's because I'm one of those who poke at things until I understand them 200%. :)
by eksterteran
Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:40 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: A Sweet Tooth Causes Cavities, Honey
Replies: 4
Views: 4975

Re: A Sweet Tooth Causes Cavities, Honey

Whoa. Didn't see that one coming. But how does the title relate? I'd say it's because his "sweet tooth" (the mistress) caused "cavities" (bullet holes :lol: ). I agree with MissAnnaLeigh. The confusion back and forth as far as which names were book characters and which were real...
by eksterteran
Wed Mar 02, 2016 4:35 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Recycling (TW: Abuse)
Replies: 11
Views: 6424

Re: Recycling (TW: Abuse)

Ahh, yes. Incest is a perfect way to get a child who's healthier than you are. >_<
by eksterteran
Wed Mar 02, 2016 4:18 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: My Town
Replies: 4
Views: 2415

Re: My Town

I really like the rhyming scheme! The only fault I find is that it's sorta vague. :)
by eksterteran
Wed Mar 02, 2016 4:09 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: "I need help."
Replies: 3
Views: 3497

Re: "I need help."

And thus begins the zombie apocalypse. Very realistic! You know the first ones would just get brushed off by the professionals.

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