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by ratweddingbow
Fri May 20, 2016 1:40 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: It's going to be okay
Replies: 6
Views: 2854

Re: It's going to be okay

Wow I really love this story :D I just wanted to know what the creature was supposed to be? Was it her own mind and bad thoughts represented as a monster? Or a real creature? Demon? I'd really like to know what you imagined it to be while writing this, thanks :P Awwww thank you so much! I didn't ac...
by ratweddingbow
Sat May 14, 2016 10:30 am
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: It's going to be okay
Replies: 6
Views: 2854

Re: It's going to be okay

That's sad... I wonder what kind of spirit or demon that would be. Not exactly evil, but not really good either. It was kind of like the spirit was protecting her, but I think the spirit killed her as protection.... I wonder why her mom was being so weird. This is a good story! Thank you. Thank you...
by ratweddingbow
Wed May 11, 2016 5:01 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: It's going to be okay
Replies: 6
Views: 2854

It's going to be okay

“What the fuck did you do it for?” Thundered a vehement male voice that was lacking control. “I had to pay the damn bills! We don’t have enough money.” Snapped a quieter female voice. “You try looking for a job!” “I’d love to but we can’t afford a fucking babysitter!” “Well you didn’t have to sell t...
by ratweddingbow
Wed May 11, 2016 4:58 pm
Forum: Story Contest: October (2015)
Topic: 466453.COM
Replies: 43
Views: 50664

Re: 466453.COM

Just tried it. Why in the hell does '466453.com' actually take you to Google? That's so scary and really adds to this great story. Apparently 466453 was the number used to text Google in order to get information once upon a time. The number spells out "Google" on those old SMS messages us...
by ratweddingbow
Sun Apr 10, 2016 11:04 am
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: A Warning To You All
Replies: 8
Views: 3726

Re: A Warning To You All

Awww, thank you 'i-am-an-aurora'!
by ratweddingbow
Fri Apr 01, 2016 3:44 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: A Warning To You All
Replies: 8
Views: 3726

Re: A Warning To You All

Thanks a lot '209musiclover'. :)
by ratweddingbow
Tue Mar 29, 2016 6:09 am
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: A Warning To You All
Replies: 8
Views: 3726

Re: A Warning To You All

Any feedback (especially constructively criticism) would seriously be great and really appreciated.
by ratweddingbow
Tue Mar 29, 2016 6:06 am
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: My Dog: Lex
Replies: 8
Views: 1602

Re: My Dog: Lex

Thank you for the help! Thanks for taking your time to write out all those points, I'll definitely try to keep those in mind. I really appreciate it. :)
by ratweddingbow
Mon Mar 28, 2016 8:51 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: My Dog: Lex
Replies: 8
Views: 1602

Re: My Dog: Lex

Hey, sorry, I'm kind of new to this story writing thing and so that's probably the reason why it sounds so child-like, and I'm 14. Any tips on how to improve would be great. I tried to be really subtle about the spirits thing that only the dog could see but obviously, I was too subtle and didn't wri...
by ratweddingbow
Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:59 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: A Warning To You All
Replies: 8
Views: 3726

Re: A Warning To You All

Thank you so much 'Amyphere' and 'deltateam'
by ratweddingbow
Sat Mar 12, 2016 12:04 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: My Dog: Lex
Replies: 8
Views: 1602

My Dog: Lex

We bought our dog, Lex, from a professional breeder who showed her dogs at competitions. The reason she was selling this dog in particular was because his feet were pointed out at odd angles – he wasn’t going to win any prizes for deformation. We loved him the first time we met him and he loved us. ...
by ratweddingbow
Sat Mar 12, 2016 12:02 pm
Forum: Story Contest: March – April (2016)
Topic: A Warning To You All
Replies: 8
Views: 3726

A Warning To You All

If I had to describe myself in one word, it would be ‘hypochondriac’. I constantly get riled up at the most normal of things but I am trying my best to counter these thoughts by being much more realistic. You see, I recently moved into a new, freshly built house. So when I heard creaking opposite my...
by ratweddingbow
Sat Mar 12, 2016 11:58 am
Forum: Story Contest: October (2015)
Topic: Be Careful What You Wish For
Replies: 14
Views: 8366

Re: Be Careful What You Wish For

So awesome. I love this story.
by ratweddingbow
Sat Mar 12, 2016 9:26 am
Forum: Story Contest: October (2015)
Topic: 466453.COM
Replies: 43
Views: 50664

Re: 466453.COM

Just tried it. Why in the hell does '466453.com' actually take you to Google? That's so scary and really adds to this great story.
by ratweddingbow
Sat Mar 12, 2016 9:23 am
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Bad Judgment
Replies: 23
Views: 32623

Re: Bad Judgment

So damn scary. It just adds to my fear of children even more. Or at least what seems to be children.

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