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by FallynSkies
Wed Jun 22, 2016 4:39 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Agoraphobia
Replies: 20
Views: 5517

Re: Agoraphobia

I wonder why people keep seeing "arachnophobia"... XD
by FallynSkies
Tue Jun 07, 2016 11:56 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Agoraphobia
Replies: 20
Views: 5517

Re: Agoraphobia

I haven't had internet lately, so I'm posting now. Thank you so much for all your kind words. It's very encouraging. <3
by FallynSkies
Tue May 31, 2016 12:27 am
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Agoraphobia
Replies: 20
Views: 5517

Re: Agoraphobia

I'm glad that the poem thing is more accepted than I thought it would be. ^_^;; Thank you all.
by FallynSkies
Sat May 14, 2016 2:57 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Agoraphobia
Replies: 20
Views: 5517

Re: Agoraphobia

Thank you guys! You're all so awesome. <3
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 2:37 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: A Man Whose Name I Don't Know
Replies: 4
Views: 1796

Re: A Man Whose Name I Don't Know

There are a ton of short horror stories that don't give background information or motive. So even though it leaves the readers with questions about why the daughter wanted him dead, that's not actually a downfall in your writing. I'm often commenting here wondering why a character does what they do....
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 1:36 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Yenaldooshi (Part 2)
Replies: 4
Views: 1060

Re: Yenaldooshi (Part 2)

Ooh, that's really creepy. I wonder if he still had his human logic, or if it's just taken over by malicious instinct. I don't know why his best friend would be one of the first people he went after. How devastating.
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 1:17 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: The Block
Replies: 1
Views: 1242

Re: The Block

I love the last line. It's kind of humorous and kind of sad.

I've never had a writer's block so bad that it would drive me to suicide. But this is extremely accurate to how your mind talks down to you when you are beginning to feel worthless... Very well done!
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 1:05 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Gus
Replies: 1
Views: 1325

Re: Gus

This was great, I really didn't see that coming.

She gets a new dog every time a child dies... I wonder how they keep finding random abandoned kids. Or if they are lying and get them from hospitals or something. Why are they sick? So sad. T_T
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 12:11 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: Windows to the Soul
Replies: 1
Views: 1362

Re: Windows to the Soul

Brother pucker. That is creepy. I don't even know why a hospital would let someone live like that. That's not luck at all. How does he even eat?

Your stories are freaky man... O^O
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 12:02 pm
Forum: Story Contest: December (2015)
Topic: Diary of a Missing Woman
Replies: 1
Views: 2389

Re: Diary of a Missing Woman

Wow, this is a really good story. It's freaking horrific and heartbreaking. Seeing hundreds of dead fetuses should have made the pregnant lady go "Maybe we should get the frickety frak out of here." I would have thought there was some kind of disease or contaminated environment. Dah! How g...
by FallynSkies
Fri May 13, 2016 11:24 am
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: My Curious Dog
Replies: 1
Views: 1609

Re: My Curious Dog

Yes, well....

That sure does leave a pit in one's stomach.
Jeezus, what has to snap in your head to do something this insane? This was definitely creepy... I'm surprised she didn't put the dog in there too, after getting so pissed off at it.
by FallynSkies
Thu May 12, 2016 9:14 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: The Petric Case
Replies: 3
Views: 3977

Re: The Petric Case

Wow. Writing stories like this would take a lot of patience and focus. It had me feeling paranoid. But I'm left with so many questions!! What really happened to his ex girlfriend? Who was the killer? Where is his body? What was in the paper bag? What content was on the videos in the box... WHAT IS G...
by FallynSkies
Thu May 12, 2016 8:25 pm
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: Spotter
Replies: 5
Views: 2468

Re: Spotter

I know the fear of posting online too well. O_O

But this is an amazing story. And it all gets tied together at the end. It's written really well, with no loose ends and great word choices. He's going to hate himself for the rest of his life.
by FallynSkies
Thu May 12, 2016 6:27 pm
Forum: Entertainment
Topic: Book Discussion
Replies: 14
Views: 2157

Re: Book Discussion

Ha ha, my husband might read the cow ones. He's weird.

He also loves a series (I think it's a series) about Vampires, and it is an erotica. Yay for Vampire porn! XD
by FallynSkies
Thu May 12, 2016 5:42 pm
Forum: Entertainment
Topic: Book Discussion
Replies: 14
Views: 2157

Re: Book Discussion

I just finished all 4 books of the "Hush, Hush" series. I think they were really good. It's about fallen angels. There's about a 36 booked series called "Fearless". It's about a girl who was born without the "fear" gene, and she can't get scared at all. And a lot of peo...

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