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by GNneko
Wed Jan 17, 2018 5:33 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2018
Topic: Sticks and Stones
Replies: 2
Views: 2038

Re: Sticks and Stones

Feels a little bit like a part of the potion series XD loved the story!
by GNneko
Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:29 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2018
Topic: Mutation
Replies: 3
Views: 1159

Re: Mutation

Loved it! The way you used such an over-used concept and made it interesting and new. Good job! I have to ask though - Why Japan? Well, for one thing, it's easier to isolate a small island nation than a big one like the United States. But more to the point, this was actually written a few years ago...
by GNneko
Thu Jan 04, 2018 10:08 am
Forum: Story Contest: January - February 2018
Topic: Mutation
Replies: 3
Views: 1159

Re: Mutation

Loved it! The way you used such an over-used concept and made it interesting and new. Good job!
I have to ask though - Why Japan?
by GNneko
Sun May 14, 2017 6:47 am
Forum: Story Contest: June 2017
Topic: Youth Potion
Replies: 16
Views: 13817

Re: Youth Potion

BRILLIANT! Loved it so much :)
by GNneko
Sun May 14, 2017 4:46 am
Forum: Story Contest: June 2017
Topic: In Memoriam
Replies: 4
Views: 1736

Re: In Memoriam

Wow. That was such a great story. Both my scientist side and my artsy side are so happy with reading this. How long did it took you to think and write this story? It has so much thoughts and dept to it.
by GNneko
Sat May 13, 2017 4:35 pm
Forum: Story Contest: June 2017
Topic: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything
Replies: 11
Views: 9132

Re: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything

Could you explain it? I'm very open to constructive criticism and I'm always looking to improve! Sure thing =] If I understand correctly, you were going for rhymes between the second and forth line of every verse right? Well, this pattern already broke at the second verse, and is not very consisten...
by GNneko
Sat May 13, 2017 7:02 am
Forum: Story Contest: June 2017
Topic: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything
Replies: 11
Views: 9132

Re: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything

Really liked the idea, but it bothered me you hadn't kept the rhythm and the rims' pattern constant. It really broke the reading flow for me... Other than that, you did a great job :) Could you explain it? I'm very open to constructive criticism and I'm always looking to improve! Sure thing =] If I...
by GNneko
Fri May 12, 2017 7:19 pm
Forum: Story Contest: June 2017
Topic: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything
Replies: 11
Views: 9132

Re: The Little Girl That Cheated At Everything

Really liked the idea, but it bothered me you hadn't kept the rhythm and the rims' pattern constant. It really broke the reading flow for me... Other than that, you did a great job :)
by GNneko
Sat Jul 23, 2016 3:53 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Spoiler Warning: Everybody Dies
Replies: 20
Views: 19751

Re: Spoiler Warning: Everybody Dies

Lovely. The atmosphere and "feelings" are going through to the reader so well.
by GNneko
Sat Jul 23, 2016 3:41 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Candles
Replies: 34
Views: 50035

Re: Candles

Nicely done!
by GNneko
Tue May 17, 2016 2:59 pm
Forum: Story Contest: May – June (2016)
Topic: Routine
Replies: 29
Views: 34065

Re: Routine

Strong. Wonderful story. Do you write anywhere eles?

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