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by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 7:08 pm
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: New Rule
Replies: 14
Views: 1751

Re: New Rule

Abbyka wrote: I'm not sure what public word document you're talking about though. I believe google documents has the ability to do that.
It is the same as a Google public document, it's just hosted by Onedrive instead of Google. It connects directly to Microsoft Word documents.
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:42 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: Horror
Replies: 1
Views: 1034

Re: Horror

*Tusk tusk tusk* This is why children aren't supposed to pick up beautiful books. You can end up intertwined with black magic. :lol:

This was a nice story. I wish we could have seen the narrator's powers in action but I understand that most of these entries are supposed to be short. Good job!
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:36 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: Sleepwalking
Replies: 1
Views: 1027

Re: Sleepwalking

I got chills. CHILLS. That was so well paced and elevated by each paragraph. I was a quarter way through and I had to stop to think if it would be a good idea to finish reading this at 1:30 AM. Turns out my tolerance bested it through 8-) This was a fantastic read though! I was hoping the house itse...
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:23 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: Window
Replies: 5
Views: 1479

Re: Window

Well that is quite horrifying to imagine. Dormmate drama would be tenfold better than The Grudge or something crawling up your windows.

Nice job with the ending. You finished it just well enough that I could be extremely creeped out for a moment. Why does it get longer????! That is terrible :lol:
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:17 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: Psychosis
Replies: 2
Views: 1648

Re: Psychosis

Aww that was quite sweet. What breed did she get to be? (I hope husky :mrgreen: )
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:12 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: The Best Christmas Ever
Replies: 5
Views: 1879

Re: The Best Christmas Ever

Oooo, that was nice. I got a little bit of a Children of the New World vibe from it with the first twist so I can't say it shocked me afterwards. (I read a lot of indie so my tolerance is beyond the roof anyways.) For a moment there I was expecting the mother to say that the sister had to be wound u...
by Allerdale
Sun Nov 27, 2016 3:58 am
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: New Rule
Replies: 14
Views: 1751

Re: New Rule

Would a public Word document link work as well? And just curious if a rebloggable Tumblr link could be attached to the work for those who want to pass it on? I found those helpful for passing the word for my favorites before (especially because authors could have their work formatted as they wanted ...
by Allerdale
Mon Jul 25, 2016 3:20 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Excuse me sir, but where is the bathroom?
Replies: 9
Views: 6843

Re: Excuse me sir, but where is the bathroom?

Crisp descriptions, great tone, and wonderful pacing. It is sad to see precious Lynn be taken like that at such a tender age (or was she? I'm sensing inception-y circular narratives). My only complaint is that his wife isn't more of a part of the story. It would have been fun to see both of them try...
by Allerdale
Mon Jul 25, 2016 3:08 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: The Others in the Mirror
Replies: 2
Views: 1367

Re: The Others in the Mirror

This was phenomenal! (Is it bad to say Lilly is my favorite?) I wonder though if everyone in this alternate world isn't a little odd like Lilly, as in it being a rejects world? I'm curious as well about Mellie's parents. Could it be she might have seen them in mirrors before?
by Allerdale
Mon Jul 25, 2016 2:58 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Surprise
Replies: 6
Views: 3371

Re: Surprise

Well...those two are some awful parents :lol: Pretending schizophrenic or not, Mike gives off an eerie vibe so I kind of saw the ending coming. Great job with pacing and working the first person narration. Not only did I enjoy reading, but your character had a unique voice (which I find isn't true f...
by Allerdale
Mon Jul 25, 2016 2:47 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Mirror Mirror on The Wall
Replies: 5
Views: 2536

Re: Mirror Mirror on The Wall

I commend you on this short piece. The fragments kept getting shorter as the tension escalated, and dear me did it get intense (got the shivers thinking about a whole room being a mirror with that creepy girl). I would have liked to have a slower build up, or some backstory on the little girl in the...
by Allerdale
Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:23 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: No One Else Can Love You
Replies: 6
Views: 4196

Re: No One Else Can Love You

Well that was unexpected. Great job! I was wondering if it was a ghost since he said his eighteenth birthday was three weeks before hers, and he said he knew her since she was five. That would be even more bizarre if the narrator's an imaginary friend she created.
by Allerdale
Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:14 pm
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Everything is For Sale
Replies: 37
Views: 29338

Re: Everything is For Sale

FormallyFreya wrote:I adjusted my theme. Will you tell me if it helped? I'd much appreciate it.
Yes, the buttons are at the bottom of the post now. Thank you for doing that.
by Allerdale
Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:35 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Damnable 288
Replies: 7
Views: 5509

Re: Damnable 288

You are very welcome. I understand. My iPhone does not cooperate plenty of times. Re the machines: I was talking more about the sections where you explain the mechanics (with the Prowlers) and schedules (with the big shipping things [sorry I can't remember, I read 10+ stories today]). I agree that y...
by Allerdale
Sun Jul 17, 2016 12:21 am
Forum: Story Contest: July - August (2016)
Topic: Farm to Table
Replies: 23
Views: 8561

Re: Farm to Table

Unsettling story indeed. As blunt as any I've ever come across. As crazy as it sounds, I loved your narrator's voice. He was so chill about everything.

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