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- Mon Sep 18, 2017 1:51 pm
- Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
- Topic: A Love Letter
- Replies: 14
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The way he described her at the very beginning sounded too fetishistic and not truly loving, I think you gave away your ending right there. This kind of situation is so common in real life and fiction that you lose a lot of suspense because we know where it's going. The threats didn't even seem far ...