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by sundance1867
Sat Dec 31, 2016 6:31 pm
Forum: Story Contest: November - December 2016
Topic: A Love Letter
Replies: 14
Views: 28288

Re: A Love Letter

I liked this story! I agree with some of the other comments that there's definitely room to improve, but I still got that rush of emotion at the reveal that you look for in a story like this. Small note on one thing that bothered me in terms of continuity. It seems to me that if he knows everything ...
by sundance1867
Mon Jun 13, 2016 9:03 am
Forum: Story Forum
Topic: Darling, didn't you know?
Replies: 12
Views: 4027

Re: Darling, didn't you know?

This was a great story! Well done
by sundance1867
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:52 pm
Forum: Story Contest: January – February (2016)
Topic: Recycling (TW: Abuse)
Replies: 11
Views: 6422

Re: Recycling (TW: Abuse)

Dear God... That was absolutely amazing. And really really terrifying. The twist at the end left that perfect hanging emptiness and despair that a story like this should leave you with.
by sundance1867
Tue Oct 27, 2015 2:21 pm
Forum: Story Contest: October (2015)
Topic: The Wolf in the Corner
Replies: 2
Views: 1875

The Wolf in the Corner

Warning: hallucinations The Wolf in the Corner Things got really bad for me my sophomore year of college. It felt like there was this weight pressing down on me all the time, especially when I’d try to go to sleep. It got to the point that I was only sleeping two or three hours at a time every coupl...

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