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Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 3:19 am
by PoeKnows
I can finally comment!! Your story is amazing! I'm not even sure if you get notifications for these comments anymore, but reading this story was an adventure! I cant wait to read more of your work. The personal touch associated with family ties was superb!

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2016 9:12 am
by ratweddingbow
Such an awesome story! Now I really hope I don't end up being put in a home like this.

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:36 pm
by drobinson1055
Magnificent story. I expected the granddaughter to find out her grandmother was possessed at some point, but the actual ending was so much better. You definitely need to continue writing. This is one of the best stories I've ever read.

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:12 pm
by Darylsdckson
drobinson1055 wrote:Magnificent story. I expected the granddaughter to find out her grandmother was possessed at some point, but the actual ending was so much better. You definitely need to continue writing. This is one of the best stories I've ever read.


Thank you for reading! I always found that regular people doing horrible things makes for the scariest story. I'm so glad you enjoyed! (:

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2016 12:35 am
by Silversil70
Great story! Hope you have more!

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2016 6:14 pm
by JustAnotherStranger
Man I don't know why, but I really want more, like what is going to happen to the mom after all that. Really an interesting idea and just completely fantastic.

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Mon May 09, 2016 12:20 am
by Darylsdckson
JustAnotherStranger wrote:Man I don't know why, but I really want more, like what is going to happen to the mom after all that. Really an interesting idea and just completely fantastic.


Thank you!! I haven't decided exactly what to do with part II yet. I do want to continue with a series of some sort, but I don't want it to suck, so I'm taking my time. It's in development though. Thanks for reading!

Re: Decisions, decisions

Posted: Mon May 09, 2016 11:07 am
by FallynSkies
After reading the story, I read all the comments so that I don't say something you have heard a million times.
I've known of this site since it was created, but just joined yesterday. I have been perusing and reading many stories for the last 11 hours (ha ha, I can't sleep at night).
This is truly fantastic, one of the best reads of my last 11 hours. I'm extremely excited to hear that you have decided to make it a series, and that I didn't have to beg like I was going to.
I am anxious to read more of your work. Thank you for this enthralling story. It really pulls you in, and the twist at the end is completely unexpected. She was so sweet, it disgusted her that the place was a torture center. And then it's like something in her broke, or gave way, and she just accepted all at once, and realized a new vengeance. I am really curious as to whether her father will agree or not with her notions on the mother.

I'm also extremely curious as to what other methods they use since the nurse said suffocation wasn't one they did often, and it was pricier. It seems to me that choking someone would be an easier alternative than most physical torture techniques. I also wonder why the dad was set on suffocation.

My mind goes down a million different highways after I finish a story. Sorry, I love to speculate. Congratulations on winning, this story truly deserves the award. Thank you.

or - as the can The the home bag. mean

Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 7:05 pm
by moongitaBog