Hi everybody, this is a story told to me by a job fellow. She had an elder brother, working as a commercial pilot, she told me, really I didn't ask her to do that, but this moment came so I listen to her very interesting story. Well he was about 38 years old, so this happened about 20 or so years ago. He was doing some freight cargo flights in the Caribbean Sea, in a tiny private firm, so tiny that that the owner, a pilot too, had to do some journeys with the staff of that plane, an old DC 9. The story goes rather simply, because that fatal night, when the plane crashed just because the owner of the company, doing as the pilot, said to had touch one of those pine crests with one tip of the wings and came down and burn, my fellow said she had a strange feeling, like a sudden and intense light coming from his right side of the face. Well, she actually had been behaviouring very rare, confused since noon, and because of that start a communication by phone with her brother. He told her that the cargo couldn't be unloaded because the lack of personnel at the time, in Cozumel airport, near Yucatan peninsula. They had to spend much time, waiting for the cargo to be unloaded. She told me he was calm but tired, as the crew had been doing so many flights that day and the previous. So, the plane crashed, she had this sensation, and then, as she was living with an elder sister in the same house his brother spend his spare time, they heard the sound of the street door opening and then shutting, as they were each one at their bedrooms at that moment. Both of them heard the sound of the door, then, whispering, she told her sister to stay at her bedroom while she went downstairs to see what happened. She found nothing, nothing at all, but when came to told that to her sister, she told her that her hair was freaking fuzzy, like been erected by a sudden fear. She feel uncomfortable and went to sleep, that night they try to call to the airport, but no one answer. Those days telephone communication was difficult, because they tried to call from Mexico City to that tiny airport in the Caribbean Sea.
Next day she went to her job, the previous one, and one of her mates told her she found her acting very strange, like a freaking machine, doing things quickly, absurdly. For instance, her mate bring a newspaper with that notice, but when my job fellow asked it and started reading, not paying attention to it, she leave it precisely open on the page with the news of that plane crash. She didn't pay attention to it, but later that day, as her brother and sister came into the office to tell here about the accident, she realized her strange behaviour, the things that happened to her the day after, and the feeling her brother, whom she had been very close because he was the eldest and she was the youngest sibling. That moment, she told me, almost with a tear drop, she knew that her brother was dead, although her brother and sister told her he was still officially missing. That could not happen, because the plane crashed on land, almost after the take off. Reports said one tip of a wing touched the crest of one of the trees aligned beyond the landing strip of the then Cozumel airport, the pilot was the owner, the copilot was a young private licensed pilot and the engineer was a third one, whilst the only one unduty and member of the crew was her brother. When they went to recognize him, she told me, he was very bad damaged, and she then saw his face, burnt from the right, as she felt that night the sudden light that make her very uneasy.
That's all, that happened 20 years. She told me this in a moment of confidence.
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might want to read through this and fix it up a bit, it's a bit difficult to read :/. or have a buddy proofread and edit! im only saying it cuz it's a little hard to understand but I do get the story! which is pretty creepy but also really sad :c
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